Friday, June 19, 2009

Practicing similes and metaphor - Nicole123's Poem


Warm air surrounding you
sun shining
brightly like a goldfish
the sky
plain blue
no white puffy clouds to be seen
beach packed with people
canter down the soft brown sand
the ocean is a flat pancake
boats soaring through the clear blue sea
dolphins diving and making a racket
and children laughing, soon to be back at school

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