Thursday, June 18, 2009

Practicing similes (and personification) - Jessica's poem

Tapping at the windows,
begging for someone to let her in.
She's seen all the ads, "escape the winter
worries, install a heat pump!" or "keep off
the rain and buy one of our amazing

Like an outcast, unwanted.

No one understands or cares that all the
rain wants is,

a friend ......

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