Friday, June 19, 2009

Practicing similes and metaphor - by Savannah


Summer reminds me of three things
sun, surf, and sand.

sun: slowly drifting through the
pale blue sky, wandering around the
world day by day.

Surf: rough waves are walls of water
glistening as people rip through
them on their surfboards or when it
drifts onto the sandy beach.

Sand: like glitter sitting silently on
the beach shimmering in the sun as
the salty water soaks slowly into the sand.

Another thing summer reminds me of is
the flowers, trees, and buzzy-bees.

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